Re: [Computerbank] documentation editing

[shevek@thump.bur.st (Simeon Scott)]

I had a quick look at the documents, they are good :) I would add a
quick intro on the
http://axxs.org/computerbank_doc/training/thin_clients page where the
table of content is listed, just a single par, perhaps could be moved
from the intro page (since you guys repeat yourselves ;)

If I can make some time I'll have a more serious go at it, I should
still have login access and manager rights. At this stage it would be
really nice if we could figure out the workflow /automated workflow
system for editing on the new documentation system. Are we just going to
use the documentation mailing list to discuss documents, or some
zope-enabled forum thing (eg the wiki .. or something else)?

I guess I should look back through the archives, since I dropped off the
mailing list some months ago through my own misadventure ;P

Anyway, good work!

Simeon



On Wed, Nov 19, 2003 at 04:15:19PM +1100, lachlan wrote:
> and hardware and sftware and trouble shooting are now up here:
> 
> http://axxs.org/computerbank_doc/training/thin_clients
> 
> mostly written by ed, edited and marked up by me
> 
> L.
> 
> 
> lachlan wrote:
> 
> >http://axxs.org/computerbank_doc/training/thin_clients/intro/
> >
> >this is the first intro doc for the thin client net that ed, con and I 
> >have been working on.
> >
> >Ed wrote a lot of the original text, which I have prettied up and 
> >posted online.
> >
> >The idea was that WFD participants could be sent off to build a client 
> >themselves, and proceed to add a machine as a thin client, hopefully 
> >on the way learning a little about tcp/ip, various parts of the /etc 
> >folder, and how to do a base install on a machine. Hopefully this 
> >hands on work would give a WFD participant a greater understanding of 
> >some of linux's nooks and crannies.
> >
> >I think this intro document needs a little editing though - both ed 
> >and I are repeating ourselves continuously....does some one want to 
> >take a look and fix it up some more?
> >
> >more docs should be up this arvo (walk throughs, hardware 
> >requirements, software requirements, trouble shoting, etc)
> >
> >cheers
> >
> >L.
> 
> 
> 
> 
> _______________________________________________
> The opinions expressed herein are solely those of the individual, and do 
> not express the opinions of Computerbank Australia Incorporated (CAI) in 
> any way.
> _______________________________________________
> 
> computerbank mailing list
> computerbank@lists.linux.org.au
> http://lists.linux.org.au/listinfo/computerbank
> Web page: http://www.computerbank.org.au
_______________________________________________
The opinions expressed herein are solely those of the individual, and do not 
express the opinions of Computerbank Australia Incorporated (CAI) in any way.
_______________________________________________

computerbank mailing list
computerbank@lists.linux.org.au
http://lists.linux.org.au/listinfo/computerbank
Web page: http://www.computerbank.org.au