SEUL: Mod to Commercial port advocacy howto (CPAH) draft

[Doug Loss <dloss@csrlink.net>]

Liz Coolbaugh from Linux weekly news suggested a change to the last
sentence in the WHY WRITE THIS? section, so here it is:

Orig--Advocating a port to another OS is much more likely to meet with
interest than advocating "giving away" product.

Mod--Advocating a port to another OS is much more likely to meet with
interest than advocating what the company may perceive as "giving away"
product, or advocating a radical change in their basic development
model.

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Doug Loss                 It is impossible to imagine Goethe
Data Network Coordinator  or Beethoven being good at billiards
Bloomsburg University     or golf.
dloss@bloomu.edu                H. L. Mencken