SEUL: Initial comment on whylinux?

["Erik Walthinsen (Omega)" <omega@seul.org>]

I haven't gotten past the first page (I just got meself a printer and have
a paper copy now), but there's something I should mention:

First section is called 'problems with existing systems', yet in the first
paragraph you explain that Linux distribs are free or very cheap.  I would
think that this particular information should go under 'why is linux a
good thing' or equiv, as the point of the first section is to point out
deficiencies, not to counter them.

I'll make a list of these if I find any more things like this, and send it
to you. (lemme see, where's that highlighter... :-)

I know, this is nit-picking, but the details matter for docs like this.

TTYL,
    Omega


     Erik Walthinsen <omega@seul.org> - SEUL Project system architect
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